Comments for ESL Winiarczyk Pd3 2011-12

Comment on Anna Pauls – Cellphones should be allowed in school by Laura Winiarczyk

Laura Winiarczyk — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 19:03:36 +0000

Anna,
Make sure when you write you just don’t “put random things together.” You want to write with a plan. Nice reflection.
4.5/5
Miss W

Comment on Jhoseph’s reflection by Laura Winiarczyk

Laura Winiarczyk — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 19:02:00 +0000

Jhoseph,
When you write in English, use I want to not “I wanna.” We only use wanna in spoken English. Also, make sure you explain your ideas. Some of your ideas in your reflection are hard to understand. What do you mean by impotent? Did you want to say important?
3/5
Miss W

Comment on Maria’s Reflection. by Laura Winiarczyk

Laura Winiarczyk — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 18:58:58 +0000

Maria,
Instead of saying most easy we say “easiest” in English. I’m glad you enjoyed the essay. 5/5

Miss W

Comment on Jessica’s Reflection by Laura Winiarczyk

Laura Winiarczyk — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 18:57:07 +0000

Nice reflection! It is good to reflect on the writing process and what was difficult and what wasn’t.
5/5

Comment on Marla’s Reflexion by Laura Winiarczyk

Laura Winiarczyk — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 18:55:41 +0000

Marla,
I am glad you learned a lot from this essay! Nice reflection!!

5/5
Miss W

Comment on Bao’s Reflection on Essay by Laura Winiarczyk

Laura Winiarczyk — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 18:54:27 +0000

Bao,
I am glad you feel that this essay helped you prepare for the SAT test. We will continue to write this year. 5/5

Miss W

Comment on Johnie’s reflection by Laura Winiarczyk

Laura Winiarczyk — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 18:53:06 +0000

Make sure you capitalize I!! I would like to help you with spelling. Johnie, you already write in complete sentences you just have to work on capitalizing the first letter of every sentence and putting a period at the end of every sentence.
Miss W
4/5

Comment on Linh’s Reflection by Laura Winiarczyk

Laura Winiarczyk — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 18:51:06 +0000

Linh,
You want to say “Title more interesting.” Also, I want to help you build your vocabulary! I am glad you feel like you improved from this essay!
Miss W
5/5

Comment on Aregash’s Eassay by Laura Winiarczyk

Laura Winiarczyk — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 18:48:53 +0000

Make sure you write in complete sentences and explain your ideas fully.
4/5
Miss W

Comment on wes Reflection on Essay by Laura Winiarczyk

Laura Winiarczyk — Fri, 28 Oct 2011 18:47:49 +0000

Make sure all your capitalize I every time!! Also, in the first sentence you want to say “Have any difficulty”

4.5/5
Miss W