Comments for eslwiniarczykperiod4 http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4 Another MTSD Blog Tue, 17 May 2011 12:10:36 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 Comment on Dalina Nguyen’s reflection by Laura Winiarczyk http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/2011/04/18/dalina-nguyens-reflection/comment-page-1/#comment-20 Laura Winiarczyk Tue, 17 May 2011 12:10:36 +0000 http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/?p=69#comment-20 Dalina, Nice reflection! I am glad you enjoyed this project! I will definitely have to continue to use the program glogster again in the future so other students can enjoy it. Miss W Dalina,
Nice reflection! I am glad you enjoyed this project! I will definitely have to continue to use the program glogster again in the future so other students can enjoy it.
Miss W

]]> Comment on Yabsera Sirac by Laura Winiarczyk http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/2011/04/18/yabsera-sirac/comment-page-1/#comment-19 Laura Winiarczyk Tue, 17 May 2011 12:08:21 +0000 http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/?p=74#comment-19 Yabsera, I'm glad you liked this project! We probably will not do this project again this year but if you have me again next year we will probably do something similar to this project on another topic. In your writing, make sure you always capitalize I. Also, make sure you always capitalize words at the beginning of a sentence and check your spelling. For example, you should have written "organize them well" not organize them wall. Nice work! Miss W Yabsera,
I’m glad you liked this project! We probably will not do this project again this year but if you have me again next year we will probably do something similar to this project on another topic. In your writing, make sure you always capitalize I. Also, make sure you always capitalize words at the beginning of a sentence and check your spelling. For example, you should have written “organize them well” not organize them wall.
Nice work!
Miss W

]]> Comment on Yarivi’s Reflection by Laura Winiarczyk http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/2011/04/21/yarivis-reflection/comment-page-1/#comment-18 Laura Winiarczyk Tue, 17 May 2011 12:04:34 +0000 http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/?p=76#comment-18 Yarivi, Nice reflectin overall! Be careful with your spelling and punctuation. For example, project in English is spelled with a j and not a y. Also make sure that you capitalize I every time you use it! You also want to say "his book" instead of he book. Miss W Yarivi,
Nice reflectin overall! Be careful with your spelling and punctuation. For example, project in English is spelled with a j and not a y. Also make sure that you capitalize I every time you use it! You also want to say “his book” instead of he book.
Miss W

]]> Comment on Dalina’s Poetry Reflection by Laura Winiarczyk http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/2011/03/14/dalinas-poetry-reflection/comment-page-1/#comment-17 Laura Winiarczyk Wed, 30 Mar 2011 14:33:46 +0000 http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/?p=54#comment-17 Dalina, Nice job overall. I am glad you like writing sonnets. I agree that sonnets are more interesting because you have to think about the pattern you are following. Here are some changes for your reflection: Remember to say "a poem" or "poetry" but not "a poetry." "is finding words to rhyme" instead of when find words to rhyme. Nice job! Dalina,
Nice job overall. I am glad you like writing sonnets. I agree that sonnets are more interesting because you have to think about the pattern you are following.

Here are some changes for your reflection:
Remember to say “a poem” or “poetry” but not “a poetry.”
“is finding words to rhyme” instead of when find words to rhyme.

Nice job!

]]> Comment on Arianna’s Poetry Reflection by Laura Winiarczyk http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/2011/03/14/ariannas-poetry-reflection/comment-page-1/#comment-16 Laura Winiarczyk Wed, 30 Mar 2011 14:29:33 +0000 http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/?p=50#comment-16 Arianna, Nice reflection! I agree that it is easier and more enjoyable to write about the things you like. Who would want to write about things they didn't enjoy? I have a couple grammatical changes for you: "You express how you feel" instead of you expresses how do you feel. "Sometimes is difficult when you don't have a special word for" instead of sometimes not have the special word for Nice job! Arianna,
Nice reflection! I agree that it is easier and more enjoyable to write about the things you like. Who would want to write about things they didn’t enjoy?
I have a couple grammatical changes for you:
“You express how you feel” instead of you expresses how do you feel.
“Sometimes is difficult when you don’t have a special word for” instead of sometimes not have the special word for

Nice job!

]]> Comment on Lynn’s Poetry Reflection by Laura Winiarczyk http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/2011/03/14/lynns-poetry-reflection/comment-page-1/#comment-15 Laura Winiarczyk Wed, 30 Mar 2011 14:25:48 +0000 http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/?p=55#comment-15 Lynn, Nice reflection. I am glad that you like poetry and that it makes you feel relaxed. I enjoy writing poetry too! Here are come changes are you: "I feel relaxed" instead of I feel relax "the words don't have to match" instead of the words it doesn’t have to match Lynn,
Nice reflection. I am glad that you like poetry and that it makes you feel relaxed. I enjoy writing poetry too!

Here are come changes are you:
“I feel relaxed” instead of I feel relax
“the words don’t have to match” instead of the words it doesn’t have to match

]]> Comment on Mehretu’s Poetry Reflection by Laura Winiarczyk http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/2011/03/23/mehretus-poetry-reflection/comment-page-1/#comment-14 Laura Winiarczyk Wed, 30 Mar 2011 14:22:52 +0000 http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/?p=51#comment-14 Mehretu, Thank you for opinion! You certainly don't have to like writing poetry. I agree with you that free verse poems are easier to write than sonnets. Be careful with a couple of your sentences, You want to say" every person has a talent" instead of "every person have talent." Be careful to make sure you capitalize all letters at the beginning of a sentence!! Also, you want to say that "There are many people who are talented" instead of "There are many people who talented in poetry." Nice job! Mehretu,
Thank you for opinion! You certainly don’t have to like writing poetry. I agree with you that free verse poems are easier to write than sonnets. Be careful with a couple of your sentences, You want to say” every person has a talent” instead of “every person have talent.” Be careful to make sure you capitalize all letters at the beginning of a sentence!! Also, you want to say that “There are many people who are talented” instead of “There are many people who talented in poetry.”

Nice job!

]]> Comment on enrique Iglesia Hero by Laura Winiarczyk http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/2011/02/23/enrique-iglesia-hero/comment-page-1/#comment-13 Laura Winiarczyk Tue, 29 Mar 2011 14:50:21 +0000 http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/?p=18#comment-13 Nice job, Arianna! I too believe that this songs expresses what true love is. Instead of saying "Love something or love people" you can say "Love something or someone." Nice job, Arianna! I too believe that this songs expresses what true love is. Instead of saying “Love something or love people” you can say “Love something or someone.”

]]> Comment on one love! by Laura Winiarczyk http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/2011/02/23/one-love/comment-page-1/#comment-12 Laura Winiarczyk Tue, 29 Mar 2011 14:48:37 +0000 http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/?p=19#comment-12 Nice response! I like the message of this song as well! We should work together and love each other. Make sure that each new sentence is started with a capital letter! Also the line, "This song is like a poetry. because, the first line and the third line have repetition sounds of words. " should read "This song is like a poem because the first and the third lines have repetition in the final sound of the final word." Make sure you don't use a period until you have a full thought and be careful to use "a poem" or "poetry" instead of "a poetry." Overall, nice job! Nice response! I like the message of this song as well! We should work together and love each other. Make sure that each new sentence is started with a capital letter! Also the line, “This song is like a poetry. because, the first line and the third line have repetition sounds of words. ” should read “This song is like a poem because the first and the third lines have repetition in the final sound of the final word.” Make sure you don’t use a period until you have a full thought and be careful to use “a poem” or “poetry” instead of “a poetry.”

Overall, nice job!

]]> Comment on Justin Bieber- Heartache by Laura Winiarczyk http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/2011/02/23/justin-bieber-heartache/comment-page-1/#comment-11 Laura Winiarczyk Tue, 29 Mar 2011 14:44:10 +0000 http://blogs.mtwp.net/eslwiniarczykperiod4/?p=26#comment-11 Lynn, Nice reflection. I agree that love is not always what you think it will be. Your line "sometimes things changes" should read "sometimes things change." I agree that some parts of this song could be like free verse poetry because he is telling a story. Lynn,
Nice reflection. I agree that love is not always what you think it will be.
Your line “sometimes things changes” should read “sometimes things change.” I agree that some parts of this song could be like free verse poetry because he is telling a story.

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